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Warrior Cats Thistlestorm by JuJuKat

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Well, if you would like help, I'll give it to you. I can't really see the face, it's far too smudged up. The hind legs are a little pudgy and don't really shape like a cats. The eyes are cute, but if you're looking for realism or something like that, try to make them more round and keep the pupils INSIDE

The lines are real smudgy and the spots are just at random and I don't think that would set on a cat correctly.

If you want to improve anatomy, keep practicing you have a lot of work to do on that. I do like this, it's really, really cute, but if you've requested a critique on this, then here it is.

I hope I've helped, keep drawing, I'm sure you'll be great someday <3
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Rexart35 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dumb critique -.- sorry
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013   Digital Artist


Sorry I'm lost here.
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh GOD XD this is terrible, I AM redoing it though. Thanks :)
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
NONONO!!
It wasn't terrible, it was really cute!!
Just some things need fixed ;A;

You can never think your stuf is terrible, you need to ALWAYS like it. Even if you don't like it, find some positive things about it ;u;

That helps improvement, and some people actually quit drawing for this reason ;M;

You're welcome ;w;
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry lol I'm not quitting NEVER! XD

I broke my tablet or I say the people who made it
broke it lol
so I... cant do cats as well... XD

I don't think all of it is BAD just some lol
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
That's great to hear ;u;
I just got a tablet like 3 months ago, and when I try with the mouse, it's squiggles.

TERRIBLE.
SQUIGGLES.

I used mouse since I was seven years old, and after a few months with a tablet, my mouse skills are shit ene

It's weird.
But I feel you bro.
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD squiggles!!! I love using the mouse.By the way is it snowing where you are?
we had eight inches so far!
I am happy for snow. Its just so fluffy and white.
Like....MARSHMALLOW FLUFF.It took me a LONG while to get use to the tablet
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
I'm snowed in bro XD
I can't leave the house to go back to my mom's because the snow is too deep to drive <X"D
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JuJuKat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me,too!I'm at my moms,though,can't get back to my dad's.
We're at a level 3 blizzard here lol so we aren't going
anywhere for awhile
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RetroChocobo Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Digital Artist
That's so weird XD
I don't know what we're at, just flooded in snow~
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